Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Christmas in Three Sentences

This week's post from a work in progress.

She was waiting at the top of the stairs when he came home, coiled tightly inside the toy bag. As he turned the corner of the landing, she hit the remote to start the ipod, and as "Baby Baby" began, she rose slowly, the bag falling away and leaving her standing naked, with two glittered stars hanging from her nipples, and tinsel woven into her pubic hair. His mouth fell open in surprise and undisguised joy, and she spread her legs apart slightly, caressing herself and whispering, "here's a present for you to open, right now."

4 comments:

  1. Hot! I love that imagery. Great work!

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  2. i'm sure there's more going through his emotional data processor than joy . . . :D very nice and extremely steamy.

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  3. Wow! Talk about fulfilling a Christmas Wish. Yup, sounds like he's getting exactly what he wanted for Christmas. Nice Snippet, PK.

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  4. Someone's having a Merry Christmas! Very HOT! Great description.

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